When he got to school, Peter was feeling quite elated. He was glad Rachel had noticed his b
new trousers, and called him 'Mr.'. It had made him feel grown up. When he reached his locker he put his bag away and then headed for the toilets, where he met his two friends, Frederick and George, just going in.
'Look at Peter, all dressed up,' said Frederick.
'Grey trousers!' said George.
'You
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new trousers, and called him 'Mr.'. It had made him feel grown up. When he reached his locker he put his bag away and then headed for the toilets, where he met his two friends, Frederick and George, just going in.
'Look at Peter, all dressed up,' said Frederick.
'Grey trousers!' said George.
'You
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