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mardi 24 novembre 2015

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Hi, I'm new on this site! My major is English literature and I need to write a short story as final paper for one of my classes. I would love some feedback on my story :yawnb: here it is:


I sneezed and wound myself with my arms. Was that day time already? Gosh. My eyes hardly opened. Alright, then, I needed to get up. I rose my back and sat on the mat, I was pitching, very, very dizzy. Aoutch
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