Frog with the Red Dot

Hi everyone, I'm Jonathan. I enjoy writing mostly short stories and poetry. However I do find it difficult to write a short story from start to finish and have it be cohesive, and have it not somehow loose its message or impact somewhere along the middle. A couple weeks ago I wrote this story, which I thought was decent. So I ask of you kindly to not rip me to shreds. Feedback/constructive critici

Frog with the Red Dot