Im interested in writing story' for my own enjoyment and just wrote my first one.

Feed back would be appreciated since its my first story.

The baron of Refrew

This ship, oh she was strong.
Carrying us quit far.
Bringing us fine ladies and gents from the land of the poets, headed north in the Atlantic.
We were a good crew
to her
the Baron of Refrew,

We are devoted, Even now on this calm eve September 1823.
Shalt she be put down 3000 fathoms beneath the sea.
To

Im interested in writing story' for my own enjoyment and just wrote my first one.