Forbidden Desires (incomplete looking for criticism)

It was dark outside. The usually repugnant city air smells clean and feels crisp with every inhale. Jason thought about how just hours earlier it was raining so hard that the world seemed to be washed away.
New beginnings, he thought.
Walking briskly, his black overcoat fluttering in a wind of his own creation, he smiles. The street lamps putting his face in a constant flux of light and shadow,

Forbidden Desires (incomplete looking for criticism)