lundi 3 août 2015

Help on correcting a short scene

Hello everyone,

I wrote a game teaser scene a few days ago in which two guards are dragging one man to cast him down into an abandoned cave. The following lines are spoken by a narrator ( the cave watcher ) who is watching the whole thing.

"He's not the first and won't be the last, for the weak always have to pay for the powerful ones mistakes.
These countless years of watching men cast do
Help on correcting a short scene

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